Trivenis

Been writing Trivenis for quite some time now.
Its an extended form of a 'SHER' innovated by Gulzaar. Poet completes a thought in two lines and then gives a twist in a third separate line.
For example one of gulzaars...
ROZ UTHKAR CHAAND TANGA HAI FALAK PE RAAT KO
ROZ DIN KI ROSHNI ME RAAT TAK AAYA KIYE

HAATH BHAR KE FAASLE KO UMR BHAR CHALNA PADA

And some of Mine :
..here's the first attempt 3/21/2006 8:31 PM
on love:

aye aasman hain ishq tumse chand ne jab ye kahan
haathon ko dal kar jeb me aasman kuch has pada

mujhse se nahin , mere andhere se, roshan ho tum jiski wajaah.
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on love in these times:

woh lahu se kiya karte the ishq ka izhaar tab
woh zunoon, woh zazbaa, woh zamaana aur hi tha

aajkal lal syahi bazaar mein sasti mila karti hain
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on the search for love :

Madhoshi, Mausiki , Mehkashi kaha.
Har naam ki khidki se jhank ke dhundhaa tumhe.

Lukka-Chippi, khel to wahi puraanaa bachchpan ka hain.
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on jealousy:

Bahut jali main, Grahan ko toka, baarish ko roka.
Tapi har din, Suraj se ishq kiya jo.

Hain khwaab dawaa ab, Raat hi souten ban baithi hai.
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on perspective:

kise sunaau ,kaun sunegaa meri kahaani.
Har zubaan par ek fasaanaa apna hi hain .

badal lo chehre , khamosh fizaa hogi.
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on work n the love of it :

geeli chaadar dhak kar soi
sukhaa paseena aur pani

kaam hi aaram hain , sukun kise chahiye
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on longing:

oons chaat kar pyaas bhujhai
raat se gala sukh raha tha.

ab aasman ko tak rahi hun , shayad baarish hogi
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on i don't know what ;p

woh gaye, ek nigah dal kar hum par.
magar khamosh hum ab tak yahi hain.

us ek sihran ko thamne mein umr guzar di humne.
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on love again:

jal ke khaak hue ishq mein teri
magar khushbu ne sara aalam dho daala.

chandan ki agarbatii thi, aag pani ho gaya.
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on a rich fat seth:

ek chaand si uski dulhaan
ek chaand uske sir ka haal thaa.

ek chaand mota pet ,chandi seth kamaal thaa.
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on kashmir:

us chinaar ke patte lal hain
tere pyaar ke rang ki tarah.

woh lahu hain , ya mausam ki lali ?
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on the poet in us
:
har insaan shayar hain,
zindagi ka khaazana hain

ye lut jaye to gum nahin , luta kar ke hi paana hain.
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on appreciation:

ek tareef hi hain jo zinda karti hain
warna zindagi kuch thak si jaati hain.

yeh din khud hi qaatil hain , har saans qatl kiye jaati hain.
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on togetherness:

andhera saath tha, magar akela tha.
ab tum ho , to alaam jagmagaa gaya hain.

ek machis ki tilli, tera chehra, aur ufanti hain roshni.
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on the ragpicker:

ek sui, dhaago ka ek lachcha
sadak se katran kapdo ki bator rahi hain.

dhand hain , choti ki frock seeni hain .
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on beauty:

naapte ho, taulte ho, kaise ise maapte ho ?
fiza hain, hawaa hain , hain behta hua paani.

kayanaat ki har sheh hi khubsoorat hain.
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on the joy of meeting:

Hazaar-Ha milna aapse.
Har bar Hazz-e-wasl badhta Hi gaya.

Hain Hasrat, ki deedar-e-hazaar aur bhi ho.
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on life:

tez raftaar zindaagi ki sadak pe bhaaga.
Dur tak manzil ka nishaan dikhtaa hi nahin.

chup kar teri bahon mein , kuch der to jeet ka guman hota hain.
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on defiance:

sir ko jhukaaye hamii bhar di.
haath tham ke saath to chal di.

dahleez par to ab kiya hain, nazar to ab milaayee hain
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on just the imagery:

raat ki boojhi angeedhi
raakh mein sana tha koyla

dhanak usme thi , ya sawera chakha tha

kuch aur

mausam me tera pyaar nazar aaya hai.
main jaha dekhoo tu har bar nazar aaya hain.
aaina jhooth bolta hain shaayad.
ki apne aks mein tera deedar nazar aaya hain.

ae khuda kyun intehaan-e-yaar leta hain.
kyun har bar yeh faaslaa badha deta hain.
kyun chhalta hain iss masoom dil ko.
ki woh jo dur hain.yu paas nazar aaya hain.

tere saajde mein dil jhukaaya hain sadaa.
teri raaza ko seene se lagaaya hain sadaa.
har karam tera mere haq mein hi lagaa mujhko.
hain kyun naraaz. man mera kyun aaj zaar nazar aaya hain.

:)

I held that beat for a moment.It was not that bad, you see. I saw my life without you.I suddenly felt free. I let go of the tussle.I gave myself the choice. I have put my thoughts to silence.I have silenced all the noise. Its Calm, Its Nice.I am ME.